Action requested: Please review
In case you missed it: I am writing a new article on Robotics. My writing process consists of the following steps: Set the goal, audience and context Prepare structure, overall storyline and title Write the first draft Review Publish After writing the draft (took me 30 minutes as I knew the storyline and title), I have now arrived in the phase in which I want my article to be reviewed. So here is the deal: I provide you with my draft article below and you will use the comments fields to provide me with feedback, encouragements, corrections and suggestions. Let’s go! Title: Why Every Great Leader Should Love Robotics (draft) I hate repetitive work. When I was a teenager, my two brothers and I had to do the dishes. On two out of every three days, I spent almost 30 minutes on something I hated instead of doing something more meaningful like reading a book, watching television or doing my homework. So how did I feel when my parents decided to buy a dishwasher? Was I afraid th